The Sequel: So much talking!

[hells_half_acre]

Oh man, I've got four chapters, but there is SO MUCH TALKING. Do you people seriously don't mind if there is chapters upon chapters of talking with no action to speak of? Because, umm...that's what you are getting.

I really hope this doesn't suck. It's easy to write and I'm enjoying writing it...but, yeah...it's harder to introduce the action this time, because I'm not starting with a big dramatic event like I did with the first one.

Comments

[lelaro.livejournal.com]

don't mind at all, your character's dialogue was one of the many reason's on why i love your fic

[partly.livejournal.com]

One of the things that I really loved about Damned Demented Demons was that you always made your "talking" scenes interesting. You have a knack of infusing all your scenes with tension -- even when the only action is chatting.

[dairygirl.livejournal.com]

I think dialogue moves as story as well as doing things. As long as the discussion is interesting and forwards your plot, I believe you have little to worry about.