Well, *I* think it's interesting. Not sure all of it moves the plot though...
Maybe you'll just have to critique me when I post it. The plot WILL pick up speed - a lot of it - by the end, it's just about getting there. This plot unfolds much slower than the last one.
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Date: 2010-02-11 02:28 am (UTC)Maybe you'll just have to critique me when I post it. The plot WILL pick up speed - a lot of it - by the end, it's just about getting there. This plot unfolds much slower than the last one.