Oh my god, I just realized that my story needs more boobs!!
Hahaha, I need general commentary. The first draft is just about finding a good plot for me and not necessarily finding the best sentences to express that plot, you know? So, it's more about what confuses you, what you think of the characters, the story, etc... and not so much whether my sentences are super run-on or I've got incorrect punctuation.
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Date: 2014-05-05 12:05 am (UTC)Hahaha, I need general commentary. The first draft is just about finding a good plot for me and not necessarily finding the best sentences to express that plot, you know? So, it's more about what confuses you, what you think of the characters, the story, etc... and not so much whether my sentences are super run-on or I've got incorrect punctuation.