(This got deleted because it suddenly felt too much like the set-up for really corny gay porn) Actually, that'd been a hell-offa cheesy porn. I liked the line about "Something needs to be done about your face", as in it needs changing (the face) can't remember what you did with the line, or did you leave it out?
I agree that it'd beeen too schmoopy, but reading it here, in this context, made me laugh again. Thanks for the look behind the scenes, it was fun. If I write, I usually don't keep the stuff I'm not sure about. I change a story so often and so much while writing, while reading it again and while reading it again, again and again, so what is saved at the end of a session (if I even can call it that) is what I liked best. but it's a good idea to keep stuff, especially for such long stories.
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Date: 2010-12-18 01:33 pm (UTC)Actually, that'd been a hell-offa cheesy porn. I liked the line about "Something needs to be done about your face", as in it needs changing (the face) can't remember what you did with the line, or did you leave it out?
I agree that it'd beeen too schmoopy, but reading it here, in this context, made me laugh again.
Thanks for the look behind the scenes, it was fun. If I write, I usually don't keep the stuff I'm not sure about. I change a story so often and so much while writing, while reading it again and while reading it again, again and again, so what is saved at the end of a session (if I even can call it that) is what I liked best.
but it's a good idea to keep stuff, especially for such long stories.