I'm glad the time jumping worked for you! I was worried it was confusing, and another one of my commenters suggested I do it a different way - but I sort of liked all my mini cliff hangers. :P
Harry doesn't know about the demon blood. Perhaps his opinion on it would have been different if he did.
I love Teddy and his friends too. They're good kids.
I'm glad the crucio was significantly horrifying. It sounds like it came across how I wanted it to. In order to blend the two universes together, it helps to emphasis the horror in Harry Potter, and emphasis the humour in Supernatural...which brings me to...
The anti-muggle charms - sounds like that worked out the way I wanted it to as well. A nice blend of horribleness for Sam and humour for what is actually being said (or thought). That segment was really fun to write.
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! You are now reading a little faster than I'm writing, and you may catch up soon!
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Date: 2010-12-02 04:05 pm (UTC)Harry doesn't know about the demon blood. Perhaps his opinion on it would have been different if he did.
I love Teddy and his friends too. They're good kids.
I'm glad the crucio was significantly horrifying. It sounds like it came across how I wanted it to. In order to blend the two universes together, it helps to emphasis the horror in Harry Potter, and emphasis the humour in Supernatural...which brings me to...
The anti-muggle charms - sounds like that worked out the way I wanted it to as well. A nice blend of horribleness for Sam and humour for what is actually being said (or thought). That segment was really fun to write.
Thanks for reading! I'm glad you liked it! You are now reading a little faster than I'm writing, and you may catch up soon!