More Merlin Reaction

[hells_half_acre]

Sorry,  I'll shut-up after this, I swear...

But I think I've figured out what my problem is with the finale, and it's actually a problem with the entire direction of S5....

If you start a show and in the first episode you set up the premise that your hero is a warlock, he's living in a country that would execute him for being a warlock, and he's told that he needs to help the Prince of that country unite all the lands into one magnificent kingdom in which magic is restored and the Prince will accept the warlock as a true friend.... then well, THAT'S your quest. Your conclusion SHOULD be the success of that journey. Not something else.

I think the Merlin writers got caught up in the actual Arthurian legend and completely forgot what the point of the show they were actually writing was. 

What S5 should have done was following Arthur and Merlin as they united the lands of Albion, following Arthur's journey as he slowly started to reconsider magic and whether it was truly evil (as he's done throughout the series, except for some reason in S5)... and then the magic reveal would be the climax, with the resolution being that Arthur accepts Merlin and Merlin becomes the adviser to Arthur in a Camelot lead Albion.

Because the only satisfying thing about the finale was the magic reveal, and watching Arthur work through the revelation until he came to accept and love Merlin as he truly was. 

Meanwhile, the fact that a united Albion actually existed was a footnote, and we somehow missed its creation - it happened in the 3 years between S4 and S5, I guess. But that SHOULD have been a triumphant moment for Merlin, that SHOULD Have been the conclusion of his quest. We never did see magic being restored to the land - we could guess, that perhaps Gwen does it, but we don't even get confirmation on that. The truth of the matter is that the way S5 of Merlin was written, it was very much a tragedy...because while Merlin couldn't stop Arthur's death because it was "foretold", he somehow managed to completely fail at restoring magic to the land (that we saw) even though that was supposedly his destiny and very reason for being AND ALSO FORETOLD. So, Merlin failed to prevent the bad prophecies and yet the good prophecies never came true. Everything went completely wrong.

So, yeah, what I'm saying is that I'm disappointed. I mean, most of the episodes in S5 made for good viewing - and some of them WERE on the right track, but over all I'm disappointed. 

We should have seen MORE of Arthur slowly coming to terms with magic, more of him questioning Merlin's odd behaviour and slowly coming to the realization that Merlin was more than he seemed... we should have seen more of Arthur creating Albion with Merlin's help, and then, when the reveal happened, we should have seen Arthur go through the same journey as he did in the actual finale, only the conclusion of the journey should have been him restoring magic to Camelot.

So, yeah, that's my two cents and the reason why I'm disappointed over all. The problem isn't the finale itself - the problem is that the writers equated the end of their show with the end of the actual Arthurian legend, completely forgetting that the premise and overarching quest in their show was DIFFERENT than Arthurian legend, and deserved a different end. Even if the Mordred's sword was still hanging over Arthur at the series finale, I think I would have been more satisfied with knowing that that was years down the road and Arthur and Merlin in the meantime had succeeded in creating Albion and restoring magic. I would have preferred to have left them in a good place rather than a place of grief and loneliness.

/rant.

Comments

[nerthus.livejournal.com]

Makes perfect sense to me!

[hells-half-acre.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm glad I'm not alone!

I think I'll just disregard the entire S5 (or most of it) and replace it with my own headcanon where the series actually has a satisfying end.

I am glad the show is over though - I'm hoping it frees up the Bradley and Colin to do better written projects, because I really do think it was their acting talent that kept me interested in the show rather than the writing.

[nerthus.livejournal.com]

I still haven't watched the finale ep, sigh! Just seeing other peoples' gifs of the death scene had me bawling, so I am resisting putting myself through that even though I do want to see it; later tonight, I guess, after everyone else here is asleep and I can sob to my heart's content! Most of the fan reviews I've read are mixed, each fan liked some aspects of the finale and season 5 in general and had a few gripes as well; but it seems mostly everyone really liked the finale. I tend to agree with you that the writing has always been very uneven and patchy; when other fans point out to me that it is basically a family show and the censorship and guidelines for such are different in the UK than here in the US so I can't expect a more 'adult' version of the show, I always reply that I know that, but that's still no excuse for just plain sloppy writing or writing something stupid to get a laugh from maybe younger viewers. For example, one of my pet peeves was always how STUPID the palace guards are; over and over and over they let themselves be diverted by the slightest noise and ALL of them run to check like idiots so of course the way is totally clear for an escape or to help someone else escape the dungeon or whatever. I mean, why have to THINK of something more complex or a better way of writing the scene, just throw it out there as a cheap, easy plot device that the guards are so dumb they all run off to see what that noise was. That always bugged me to pieces, Arthur is supposed to have the best men and yet they're so lame, sigh. They don't even TRY most times to make Merlin's magic more 'hidden' in certain scenes; instead they just expect us to buy into this lame plot device that suddenly NO ONE can see Merlin's eyes glow gold or magic erupt around him. Clumsy, clumsy. Some of the plots were very good IDEAS but so poorly executed in the writing of them. I totally agree with you that the only reason I've stuck through all 5 seasons is for Colin and Bradley; their chemistry and skill has made what is really a sometimes painfully inept show something almost special to watch. It will be good to see them do other things, but I will forever miss the magic (no pun intended!) of them TOGETHER, and that is part of why that ending is so so emo for me. And I do get that fans are handwaving the whole 'golden period' to be something still to come with a reincarnated Arthur, or some say it already occured but the show just didn't dwell on it; but if that were true, then they omitted a huge part of their own canon based on season 1, ugh. So for me it would logically have to be a future coming together of the two again, but to envision all the knights and Gwen and everyone long dead and Merlin alone so long waiting for Arthur just depresses me, sigh.

[hells-half-acre.livejournal.com]

I actually get more emotional about gifs and stills than I do about the actual events in shows - it doesn't make much sense. I have to see the moments removed from context before I can get weepy about them, I guess.

But yeah, you can write a "children's" show and still have good writing - so that's no excuse. And there are plenty of shows on British TV that get past the censorship just fine and have better writing - so that's not an excuse either. The fact is just that Merlin did not have good writers - they came up with an interesting concept, but they didn't have the ability to have that concept reach its full potential.

There's very little emotional follow through - I'm sure the emotional follow through that there WAS was probably more down to Bradley and Colin and the directors than it was down to the writing. Furthermore, once a character became a villain, they became a two dimensional cackling villain. The only exception to this was arguably Uther, who I thought was a fantastically grey villain for at least S1. But, you notice that when he comes back in S5, he's suddenly a two dimensional pure-evil villain.

I guess the real tragedy of Merlin isn't that we never got to see Albion and the golden years of Arthur's reign - but also that SO MUCH POTENTIAL was lost in the show itself. Colin and Bradley were phenomenal playing opposite each other and the idea that this might have been our only time to see it is very sad indeed.

[nerthus.livejournal.com]

Exactly! I thought it was just me feeling frustrated about the lack of any real emotional follow through from episode to episode, as I do tend to get over-invested in my fave characters sometimes; but that was probably my #1 complaint about the whole series, the lack of any emotional consequences to anything that went before. I also agree that by the end Morgana was just a caricature of EVOL, sigh; I couldn't wait for her scenes to be over because they were just so cartoonish and lacked the levels of nuance and complexity which would have made her truly terrifying.

[hells-half-acre.livejournal.com]

I'm in complete agreement.