ext_144735 ([identity profile] hells-half-acre.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] hells_half_acre 2010-12-18 10:24 pm (UTC)

Yes, I especially like to keep anything long I've cut out, because I'm constantly writing on a deadline and I need to make a word count. So, I don't want to lose an hour of work completely.

Thanks for agreeing with me about the cheesy porn :P I changed the line to "Sammy, fix your face" and then Neville suggesting he wash up in the greenhouses - which not only got rid of the cheesy-porn feeling, but it also moved us into the next scene, so it was a much better way to do things.

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