I would have LOVED the prostitute bit to have been in it
Yeah, I had forgotten about it until today, and now I really wish it was in there too! Man, I have half a mind to rewrite that bit now...sigh. Wish I could remember what Draco was thinking...part of me actually thinks my deleted bit was better than what I published.
The snowball fight really only reads as cheesy gay porn for me though, so no chance of it getting back in :P
Oh and I also liked the paragraph you thought was "too cheesy".
Yeah, I'm really confused as to why I deleted that bit now. Ah well, what's done is done.
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Yeah, I had forgotten about it until today, and now I really wish it was in there too! Man, I have half a mind to rewrite that bit now...sigh. Wish I could remember what Draco was thinking...part of me actually thinks my deleted bit was better than what I published.
The snowball fight really only reads as cheesy gay porn for me though, so no chance of it getting back in :P
Oh and I also liked the paragraph you thought was "too cheesy".
Yeah, I'm really confused as to why I deleted that bit now. Ah well, what's done is done.